Wednesday, November 13, 2013

Here is my third Creative Writing Story. It is about how we should not judge people, and it is a fiction story.


Once there was a boy who was very poor. At least, that’s what he dressed like.  His name was John. Most people stayed away from him because they would be teased if they hung out with him. So he was very lonely and sad. He didn't have any good friends.          
I mostly stayed with my group of friends and no one else. Once I was walking home with my friends and I saw him walking home by himself. He looked very sad. My friends didn't bully people like him,  but they did stay away from them. I wished I could get to know that boy.
One day when I was in town getting groceries, I saw him. He was in the Super Market. He bought a huge TV and a bunch of snacks. I was shocked, because up to now, I thought he was really poor! After he checked out, I followed him home to see where he lived. I was surprised again! He lived in a huge house, much bigger than I lived in!
The next day was Saturday, so we didn't have any school. I went back to the boy’s house and rang the doorbell. A maid came to the door and asked me who I was. I told her I was one of John’s friends from school. She let me in and told me to wait in the parlor. The parlor was a very high ceiling room. I sat down on one of the enormous couches there were to choose from.
After a few minutes, John came into the room. He stared at me for about ten seconds, and then said, “Why are you here?” I told him that I would like to be his friend. He asked me why I hadn't come already. I told him that I had always wanted to be his friend, but that I was always too busy with my other friends until now.  He smiled and said, let’s play a game. So we went downstairs and played video games for an hour, until I had to go home. So I said good bye and walked home.

So from then on, we were best friends and hung out all the time, and people began to see that he was a cool guy, especially after they figured out that he wasn't poor. So I will never again judge someone by what they wear, or look like, or how much money it appears that they have. Because now I know, you should never judge a book by it’s cover.

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